The Sincerest For Of Poetry
Apprenticed To My Mother
Walking Into Trouble
Dead Flies and Sherry Trifle
The Last Will Of Sven Andersen
Booms And Busts
Buster & Moo
Salisbury Square
My Father and Other Liars
Life In A Conversation
Life, in a Grain of Sand
Life In A Flash
Tag Archives: critique
Story Chat: A Chance To Add Your Fourpenneth
Marsha Ingrao hosts a monthly writing blog, Story Chat which asks writers to submit a short story and then lay themselves open to a critique from readers. If you’ve ever wanted some forthright, wholesome and perceptive feedback, this is a … Continue reading
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Tagged creative writing, critique, editing, marsha ingrao, story chat
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Cool Water (v2)
You kindly reviewed this story and gave me some great feedback; here’s a revision. I’d be delighted if you could have a look and see if you prefer this version or if you think there are improvements; I should add … Continue reading
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