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Story Chat: A Chance To Add Your Fourpenneth

Marsha Ingrao hosts a monthly writing blog, Story Chat which asks writers to submit a short story and then lay themselves open to a critique from readers. If you’ve ever wanted some forthright, wholesome and perceptive feedback, this is a … Continue reading

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Cool Water (v2)

You kindly reviewed this story and gave me some great feedback; here’s a revision. I’d be delighted if you could have a look and see if you prefer this version or if you think there are improvements; I should add … Continue reading

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