And A Terrible Time Was Had By All #writephoto

This week’s #writephoto prompt is fun and fluffy, though what about the response…

The panel stood and waited until the interviewee settled. One, a woman with flamming hair and an unfeasibly black shield that made your eyes turn inside out if you looked directly at it, wiped the front with a hanky, looking at the white smear with something approaching an apocalypse.

‘Sit… er, or would you rather perch, Harry?’ The Chair shifted uneasily, unused to having small feathered flyers inside the Citadel.

‘PERCHING IS EASIER, THANKS. AND SORRY ABOUT THE DEPOSIT, CAROLE. I’M WORKING ON THESE INVOLUNTARY EVACUATIONS.’

Carole War narrowed her gaze and several hoards of slathering killers moved to Defcon 2, readying themselves for mass destruction in response. ‘No sweat Harry. I’m sure it’ll clean off.’ She batted away the man to her left whose snaking tongue oiled its way towards the remaining smear, oozing with desire.

Kevin Famine hissed at Carole. ‘I was only trying to help.’

‘Oh sure you were. You’ve evolved to absorb all goodness out of everything. Licking the Beast will not help it repel every violent attack.’

Kevin sniffed. ‘It’ll look pretty.’ He sniggered and swallowed some airborne protein.

Carole’s eyes narrowed further as she turned her gaze onto her emaciated companion; somewhere in the Middle East two former allies unleashed seven shades of hell on each other for no apparent reason.

The Chair billowed out, causing the room to fill with terror. Carole and Kevin slid apart. ‘Perhaps we can return to the reason for this extraordinary meeting of the Apocalypse Four.’

Everyone straightened up.

‘Right, first Trevor Pestilence sends his apologies but he’s developed a bit of a snuffle and didn’t want to pass it on the the rest of us.’

Everyone murmured their approval.

‘I’ll send him our thanks and good wishes, shall I?’

‘Good wishes? Going a bit far, don’t you think?’

‘Yes, Carole, you’re probably right. Maybe something along the lines of “thanks and rot in Hell”?’

More nods.

‘Good. Moving onto the substance of the meeting… Harry.’

‘BOSS.’

‘The new look? Can you talk us through it?’

Harry Death hopped from the arm of the chair and turned slowly, displaying its full plumage. Kevin Famine ground his teeth, resisting the urge to swallow the small bird, knowing if he did so the consequences in terms of endless deadly pandemics would bring forth a memo from God, reminding them all of their responsibilities to Armageddon and that keeping Sundays free of mayhem was not negotiable. No one wanted to receive a memo.

‘WELL, AS WE AGREED WE TOOK SOUNDINGS AND, WELL, THE THING IS, THE MILLENNIAL CLIENT BASE AREN’T KEEN ON THE WHOLE “ HELLO, I’M THE GRIM REAPER” FOLLOWED BY A SWICH OF THE OLD SCYTHE AND OFF YOU GO TO YOUR HEREAFTER. SO WE ENGAGED A BRAND CONSULTANCY WHO SAID THE PROBLEM WAS WE WERE MAKING DEATH TOO FINAL, TOO END OF LIFE-ISH AND IDEALLY WE’D EASE THE SOON TO BE DECEASED INTO THEIR NEW STATUS AS FORMERS. THEY WANTED WHOLESALE CHANGES : NO SCYTHING, NO SPEAKING IN CAPS, LOSE THE HOOD, GET SOME FLESH ON THE BONES…’

Carole caught a fly and held it in front of Kevin who tried to catch it in his double dislocatable mandibles. ‘You’ve not lost the booming, Harry.’

‘NO WELL, A MYTHICAL NIGHTMARE CAN’T JUST GIVE UP EVERY DEFINING CHARACTERISTIC, CAN ONE?’

Everyone nodded, thinking about what they’d not be prepared to lose.

The Chair steepled his fingers. ‘Becoming a sparrow…’

‘WREN…’

‘Wren, is it? Becoming a wren is a bit of a stretch. I mean aren’t we supposed to send fear and terror coursing through their veins?’

‘APPARENTLY THE DAYS OF CREATING UNBRIDLED PANIC ARE NO MORE. WE HAVE TO THINK MINDFULLY AND EMPATHISE WITH THE RECIPIENT OF THE MESSAGE WE ARE INTENDING TO CONVEY. THE SUGGESTION IS, IF WE COME ACROSS AS CUDDLY AND CUTE, IF WE PECK RATHER THAN EVISCERATE WE MIGHT…’

‘…As well go back to Hell. Where has all this nonsense come from?’

‘IT SEEMS MANAGEMENT OF THE HEREAFTERS HAVE RECEIVED COMPLAINTS. THEY CARRIED OUT A SURVEY AND THE RESULTS SUGGESTED WE NEED A MORE DISCERNING APPROACH.’

‘A what?’

‘THESE DAYS IT IS IMPORTANT TO RECOGNISE DIFFERENCES. WE NEED TO HAVE REGARD TO THE LIFE LIVED IN DETERMINING THE METHOD OF INFLICTING DEATH. TERMINATING A SAINT IN THE SAME WAY AS A SINNER, FAILS TO GIVE DUE REGARD TO THE LIFE LIVED. SCYTHES AND HOODS ARE ALL VERY WELL, SO THE CONSULTATIONS TELL US, FOR MURDERERS AND PHILOSOPHERS BUT SOMETHING LESS OLD TESTAMENT IS SUGGESTED FOR THE CHARITY WORKERS AND THOSE PEOPLE WHO MEASURE YOUR FEET IN SHOE SHOPS.’

‘A wren with a booming voice who pecks you to death? Is that the best they can do?’

‘IT’S ONE OF A NUMBER OF FORMS AND SCENARIOS WE ARE TRIALLING.’

‘And if we stick to the old ways?’

‘THEY’LL PUT THE WHOLE SERVICE – THAT INCLUDES WAR AND PESTILENCE TOO – OUT TO TENDER.’

Carole looked disgustedly at Kevin. ‘What about famine?’

Kevin smiled smugly and licked his anus with a degree of contentment.

‘They’ll disband famine. They think body shaming is working far more effectively. Kevin will become an Influencer.’

Kevin swallowed hard, coughed and spat out his small intestine.

Everyone looked down, unsure they were capable of speaking. Finally the Chair looked at Harry. ‘How are you finding it? It’s quite a change.’

‘WELL, ALL THINGS CONSIDERED IT’S NOT TOO BAD. I’D HAVE PREFERRED SOMETHING WITH MORE COLOUR – I’VE MOANED ABOUT THE BLACK CAPES FOR YEARS. AND NOT HAVING TO RIDE THAT BONY HORSE IS A PLUS; IT’S DONE MY HIPS NO FAVOURS, I CAN TELL YOU. BUT A WREN LACKS CREDIBILITY. A BIT TOO CUTE AND SOMETIMES, THE ELDERLY FIND MY NEW OCTAVE RANGE A STRUGGLE. AT LEAST BEFORE, IF THEY WERE DEAF, THEY KNEW WHAT THE UNIFORM MEANT.’

‘So we should continue the trialling?’

‘I’D SAY SO.’

‘Thanks Harry. Alright. We’ve taken up enough of everyone’s time. We’ll stand over the other items till next time: do we offer Nectar points with each war declared and double points for extending the conflict beyond Christmas; should we petition for climate change to be paused as it’s undermining famine’s good work in non human natural disasters; and while the pandemic was a stunning success, we need to learn the lessons from the unexpectedly quick vaccine response – can we prepare for more and more deadly variants to be released sooner to undermine those efforts?’

Everyone agreed.

‘Right, well if we’re done, who’s time for a pie and a pint. Lucifer’s reading his septic poetry at the Book of Revelations and I promised to pop in and show some support.’

About TanGental

My name is Geoff Le Pard. Once I was a lawyer; now I am a writer. I've published several books: a four book series following Harry Spittle as he grows from hapless student to hapless partner in a London law firm; four others in different genres; a book of poetry; four anthologies of short fiction; and a memoir of my mother. I have several more in the pipeline. I have been blogging regularly since 2014, on topic as diverse as: poetry based on famous poems; memories from my life; my garden; my dog; a whole variety of short fiction; my attempts at baking and food; travel and the consequent disasters; theatre, film and book reviews; and the occasional thought piece. Mostly it is whatever takes my fancy. I avoid politics, mostly, and religion, always. I don't mean to upset anyone but if I do, well, sorry and I suggest you go elsewhere. These are my thoughts and no one else is to blame. If you want to nab anything I post, please acknowledge where it came from.
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5 Responses to And A Terrible Time Was Had By All #writephoto

  1. willowdot21 says:

    This is so good Geoff as you know I live this guy’s they are so misjudged! They get such a bad press don’t they….. personally I love the bones and cloak look very chic!
    As for a Wren very close …. My Mum always said a Robin Red Brest was a harbinger of death … I think Death would like that look chubby, cute and colourful 💜💜

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  2. I can’t live with all these modern changes. Is there an option to self identify as deceased? That should alleviate my concerns.

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  3. noelleg44 says:

    Trevor Pestilence? Good one!

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  4. Love these guys. Do they have an agent?

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  5. Rowena says:

    Wonderful story, Geoff. I’ve been out of the corporate scene for a while now, and you brought it all back. Ver6y clever.
    I’ll be keeping my eyes peeled and keeping a low profile.
    Best wishes,
    Ro

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