A lot of thought has gone into Charli Mills’Special prompt, here, for Sue Vincent
January 28, 2021, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about life as a river of consciousness. Think about the possibilities of the prompt. Go where the prompt leads!
This 99-word story prompt will be posted and presented to Sue Vincent on February 17.
This is my small contribution.
From One Question To The Next, Ad Infinitum
Earliest memories are impossible to confirm, as time coalesces when young. Mine, if it be such involves me, in my pushchair watching a thrush smash a snail on a flagstone. My reaction was to ask my mother why. First memory and first question.
Life runs on questions, expanding from the toddler’s incessant whys, through the hows and whens and wheres to the teenager’s whatevers and beyond.
We paddle forwards on those questions, sometimes battling intractable ignorance and at others flowing easily as answers accumulate in our wake.
Eventually Mother Nature answers my final why with a terse ‘why not’.
So true Geoff life is a river of flow with questions, with the odd eddy of answers… The main thing is life flows on 💜💜💜
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It’s good to keep going with the flow!!
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I love this, Geoff. What a profound reflection on life’s journey in questions. Well done!
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Thanks Diane. I’ve always thought nature would be snarky, come the day!!
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Well done.
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Thanks
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I am speechless. This is profound. I will be reading this many times over. My goodness, Geoff.
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Oh well gosh… erm thanks!!
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You are very welcome, Geoff. I meant every word.
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Life in a nutshell – well 99 words anyway. I guess why not answer ‘why not?’ when there seem to be too many still unanswered questions.
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Mother nature is as confused as the rest of us!!
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You could be right. 🙂
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Maybe the ultimate maturity or wisdom is when the why’s and the why not’s cancel each other out.
A well spent 99 words here.
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Thanks D. There’s a fatalistic streak coming out here. I’ve often thought latterly that the idea life can be unfair gets a lot of air time whereas life is generous doesn’t resonate so much. Maybe that’s what i was trying to say
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You said it, in that Mother Nature has the last word regardless. Always; and why not.
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She’s very opionated but often in a good way
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