Something To Crow About #shortstory

‘Hello?’

‘Sorry? Did you…?’

‘Speak? Yes.’

‘But you’re…?’

‘A crow. Yes.’

‘How…?’

‘Right now “why” is more pressing.’

Jim Pale stood back. This was a joke. Some teen’s trick. Or one of those TV shows making a fool of him.

‘I’m neither a trick nor spoof TV.’ The crow sounded quite put out.

‘Did you read my mind?’

‘More your expression. It helps us survive to know what predators think.’

‘I’m not a predator.’

‘Not now you’ve got Lidl and a taste for cottage pie, but it’s not that long ago you ate my ancestors. A millennium is nothing in the life of a crow.’

‘You’re not one thousand years old.’

The crow grunted. ‘All I’m saying is I have to be desperate to speak to a human.’

Jim stepped back. ‘Why aren’t you flying?’

The crow sighed. ‘At bloody last. The “why” question.’

‘Look. If you want help, sarcasm is hardly going to encourage it.’

‘It’s in the name, moron. “crow”. It’s what we do. We could have been called sneers or eye-rolls but we stuck with crow as the name. It’s suggestive of superiority.’

Jim began to turn away.

‘Oh all right.  I’m sorry. Okay? Does that make it better? You’re the dominant bloody species and I’m a sodding bird yet your skin is as thin as an anaemic slug.’

Jim coloured. ‘Sorry. How come you’re…? Actually, what are you doing? Hovering? Floating?’

‘I’m stuck. Frozen. Rendered immobile.’

‘Does that happen often?’

‘Really? You need to ask that? Geez, are you really as stupid as you look?’

‘I’m off.’

‘No, hang on.’

‘Why should I? You’re a foul-mouthed…’

‘Are you saying I look like a chicken?’

‘Now who’s a numpty? Foul, with a “u”.’

‘It was a joke? Of course I don’t have a chicken’s mouth.’

Jim checked his watch. ‘I need to get on.’

‘All right.  Bloody hell. Look, one minute I’m swooping down for that burger crust there, the next I’m here, in mid-beat like one of those ridiculous porcelain ducks you love to stick above your fireplaces.’

‘No one has flying ducks anymore.’

‘You looked in number seventy-two recently? She even has antimacassars. Can we stop this redundant intimacy? You said you were busy. Just see what’s stopping me flying, will you?’

Jim stepped forward. He looked around the suspended crow. ‘It looks like you have two strings holding you in place.’

‘Strings?’

Jim peered hard. ‘Actually there are more than two.’

‘Is it some sort of net?’

‘Noooo, more like puppet strings.’

‘I’m no one’s bloody puppet.’

Jim reached up and tugged at one. The crow’s left wing beat slowly.

‘Hey, stop that! Bloody cheek.’

‘You’re trussed up like a ch…’

‘Don’t say it. Don’t you dare say it! Just cut me down and I’ll be on my way.’

‘How do I know I should? I mean I don’t know who you belong to, do I?’

‘Oh that’s great. I’ve just undermined your whole belief system by talking and showing you I can mind-read…’

‘Face read…’

‘Stop bloody quibbling. And now you question if I’m someone’s pet.’

Jim nodded. ‘Yes. Fair point.’ He reached up and touched the nearest wing.

The crow jerked away. ‘That tickles. Be firm, will you?’

‘You are touchy, aren’t you?’

‘Do you really need an answer to that?’

‘No, I suppose not. Here,’ he unhooked a string. Then another. After less than a minute the crow stood by Jim’s feet. ‘Better?’

‘I just want to know who did this. Bloody nerve. Right. I’d better be off.’ The crow turned and stretched its wings.

Jim said, ‘Are you going to say thank you or anything? Show your appreciation?’

The crow twisted its head and held Jim’s gaze for a moment. Then he took to the air and flew in a wide arc. As his flight path crossed where Jim stood he emptied his bowels in a white stream of avian faeces that hit Jim slap on the forehead.

Jim staggered back, stunned. ‘What was that for?’

The crow curved away cackling. ‘I thought you lot considered that to be lucky? Well, be lucky, Jim Pale. I hope it’ll mean you’ll have something to crow about.’

This is an adapted version of a story I wrote a while back that I have submitted to Chelsea Owens new prompt on hilarity. Not sure it achieves the levels need but I hope you get the odd titter from it.

These are the basic rules:

Write a short story, poem, song, or really long sentence about Birds.

Don’t make it too long. We’ve got real life to get back to.

The goal is to make me, the judge LAUGH ALOUD. Whoever tickles my funny bone the best will be crowned champion.

As a tip, I generally think and live in a G-Rated world. I don’t find crude or profane things very humorous.

About TanGental

My name is Geoff Le Pard. Once I was a lawyer; now I am a writer. I've published four books - Dead Flies and Sherry Trifle, My Father and Other Liars, Salisbury Square and Buster & Moo. In addition I have published three anthologies of short stories and a memoir of my mother. More will appear soon. I will try and continue to blog regularly at geofflepard.com about whatever takes my fancy. I hope it does yours too. These are my thoughts and no one else is to blame. If you want to nab anything I post, please acknowledge where it came from.
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7 Responses to Something To Crow About #shortstory

  1. ellenbest24 says:

    Haaaha! I knew it was coming then splat!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Ritu says:

    Well, you made me laugh!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Thank the Lord……….

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Pingback: WINNER of the Weekly Hilarity Contest 5/8/2020 | Chelsea Ann Owens

  5. And now I’ve learnt to never trust a crow.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Good story. Jim was quite relaxed about it all, keeping it cool. The crow had an interesting personality, too.

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