Things Go Better….

I gave Chelsea Owens Terrible Poetry comp a go and I wasn’t bad enough. Judge for yourself. The idea was to come up with an alternative advertising jingle…

We can stick it up our noses
We can rub it on our gums
We can sprinkle it like sugar
And lick it with our tongues

It’s dusty white and naughty
It doesn’t carry tax
It’s far less calorific
Than your average Pepsi Max.

The moral of this ditty
Is when you go for broke
Ignore all other stimulants
And stick with good old Coke

About TanGental

My name is Geoff Le Pard. Once I was a lawyer; now I am a writer. I've published four books - Dead Flies and Sherry Trifle, My Father and Other Liars, Salisbury Square and Buster & Moo. In addition I have published three anthologies of short stories and a memoir of my mother. More will appear soon. I will try and continue to blog regularly at geofflepard.com about whatever takes my fancy. I hope it does yours too. These are my thoughts and no one else is to blame. If you want to nab anything I post, please acknowledge where it came from.
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31 Responses to Things Go Better….

  1. V.M.Sang says:

    Definitely not bad enough! Lol

    Liked by 2 people

  2. willowdot21 says:

    Good advice 😟🙂😜💜💜💜

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Bryntin says:

    Obviously you’re meant to put it into the competition under your own name, Mr Gove.

    Liked by 3 people

  4. Ritu says:

    😂😂😂 pretty bad, but pretty good, too!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. arlingwoman says:

    You’re right. It’s a nice little ditty. Brings to mind Eric Clapton…

    Liked by 1 person

  6. I liked it. I can see this as the Christmas jingle advert. Better than my Vanish attempt.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Elizabeth says:

    Wow. I thought it was great. Sadly I can no longer find my old dealer!

    Liked by 1 person

  8. That is absolutely brilliant!! Ha! Ha! Ha! Katie

    Liked by 1 person

  9. noelleg44 says:

    LOL, Geoff. Maybe that’s why it wasn’t bad enough? I think your effort brilliant.

    Liked by 2 people

  10. Lucy says:

    This is hilarious!

    Liked by 1 person

  11. I think this is hilarious, Geoff.

    Liked by 1 person

  12. George says:

    Far too good.

    Liked by 1 person

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  14. Mick Canning says:

    Don’t be disheartened Geoff. It was bad.

    Liked by 2 people

  15. Violet Lentz says:

    I think it is perfection.

    Liked by 1 person

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