The Barriers To Love #carrotranch

Dorinda knew falling for someone rendered inert by illness made no sense. She sat and learned about his unremarkable life, loving him for it. Talking and singing, she attended his needs. She couldn’t explain her curious infatuation but it fulfilled her in ways beyond logic. She heard the prognosis, knew it hopeless but alongside his inevitable decline her love grew, albeit wrapped in an ineffable sadness and guilt that he couldn’t know how she felt about him.

Locked-in, Thomas didn’t know this angel who stroked his hand, wet his lips and cared but he loved her all the same.

This is written in response to the Carrot Ranch’s’ latest prompt:

November 21, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a romance. Focus on the relationship between two people. Build tension and end on a happy(ish) note. Go where the prompt leads!

About TanGental

My name is Geoff Le Pard. Once I was a lawyer; now I am a writer. I've published four books - Dead Flies and Sherry Trifle, My Father and Other Liars, Salisbury Square and Buster & Moo. In addition I have published three anthologies of short stories and a memoir of my mother. More will appear soon. I will try and continue to blog regularly at about whatever takes my fancy. I hope it does yours too. These are my thoughts and no one else is to blame. If you want to nab anything I post, please acknowledge where it came from.
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22 Responses to The Barriers To Love #carrotranch

  1. Ritu says:

    Beautifully tragic 💜

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  2. Aw, Geoff! ❤

    I can read this sort of romance anytime.

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  3. willowdot21 says:

    Absolutely perfect Geoff, one of your best💜


  4. Your romantic and poignant self is showing, Geoff. You have better be careful or you will be writing an romance next.

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  5. So tender – and an original take on the theme

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  6. Tender and loving.

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  7. Erika Kind says:

    This was very poignant, Geoff. Beautiful!

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  8. Elizabeth says:

    It reminded me of loving a friend’s mother with Alzheimer’s. We never know what love is being returned when one can no longer speak. Thanks for the touching scene here with the locked in man.

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  9. Charli Mills says:

    Oh, Geoff, you pulled the heart-strings with this one!

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  11. This is excellent Geoff – so well laid out and delivered.
    Again you leave me wishing I’d thought of and written this piece.
    Well done sir!

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