Nigel Deare and The Curse Of the Lillies #flashfiction

Nigel Deare had felt for sometime that he was born in the wrong era. Back when his father was his age, he had to hold down several jobs but at least the variety was in the employment not in you.

Not these days, not since they’d introduced multi-species adaptation. To meet the mortgage payments, his medical insurance and the considerable amount of depilation cream needed between morphings, Nigel was, variously: an engineer for the local cloning company; a guide dog to help old Mrs Tweeble; a trainee Jersey milker, providing supplies to the local dairy; and a randy stag, servicing a herd of forty-two hinds in Rickmansworth. He’d chosen the last, not for the money but the two weeks of continuous sex though he had come to realise it might be something of a mistake as he had yet to master exactly where the antlers were meant to go.

The current two-week stint on the rut had just begun, shortly after he had met and started dating Lily, an accountant, part-time school gerbil and recent convert to the vegan employment opportunities that came with transmigration into various plants.

So it was that Nigel had just finished a shift and was due to meet Lily for some sushi and cud when he had a call from his boss at the engineering company he worked for. Could he divert to Richmond on Sprout and fix a Communal Mark V Vibromax cloning scanner which had developed an arrythmic reflux which if not stopped would river a children’s birthday party the following day.

He needed the money so agreed to meet Lily at the cloning office. She agreed she’d be happy trying out her weekend’s commissions while he sorted out the problem.

Being a stag isn’t the best preparation for working on delicate machinery – the obvious lack of opposable thumbs is one problem but so are the wretched antlers. While Nigel cursed and struggled with the spanner, Lily kept up a string of mindless chatter as she slipped from a small copse of alder saplings into bowl of petunias. As Nigel lifted the cowling and peered inside, Lily read the details of her next role.

‘OMG!’ she squealed. ‘Just look at this.’

With his hoof on the recalcitrant on button Nigel looked up, at the exact moment Lily became to transform. There is a point when a morphee is between states and, in that moment, you might take on characteristics of both states. In this case Lily was becoming her namesake, a yellow Lily. As Lily slipped into something green and slinky, Nigel first froze as she took the form of a slick naked green nymph but then as her pert stamens and buoyant breasts became apparent he lost all self-control and, in his oversexed, rutted up state his hoof twitched violently.

I was like mainlining concentrated deernip.

The twitch might have been the start of something romantic had he not also jammed the functionality sensor into overdrive.

It took them both a few seconds to realise what Nigel had done but as Lily began to produce more and more lilies disaster loomed.

‘I need water, Nigel.’

‘But I must turn off the machine.’

‘Later. Get me in the river. NOW!’

Lilies were filling the office and spilling out of the door. Nigel made a decision he was to regret. Using his usefully prehensile tail he grabbed Lily, who held onto her clones and dragged them to the River Sprout.

As Nigel, now totally trapped in a writing mass of lilies and moving further and further out into the water, he looked back at the receding river bank. Standing, staring at him was the Deliveroo driver.

‘You order the sushi?’

This has been written in response to the latest ‘I Challenge You’ prompt from Esther Chilton, here

About TanGental

My name is Geoff Le Pard. Once I was a lawyer; now I am a writer. I've published several books: a four book series following Harry Spittle as he grows from hapless student to hapless partner in a London law firm; four others in different genres; a book of poetry; four anthologies of short fiction; and a memoir of my mother. I have several more in the pipeline. I have been blogging regularly since 2014, on topic as diverse as: poetry based on famous poems; memories from my life; my garden; my dog; a whole variety of short fiction; my attempts at baking and food; travel and the consequent disasters; theatre, film and book reviews; and the occasional thought piece. Mostly it is whatever takes my fancy. I avoid politics, mostly, and religion, always. I don't mean to upset anyone but if I do, well, sorry and I suggest you go elsewhere. These are my thoughts and no one else is to blame. If you want to nab anything I post, please acknowledge where it came from.
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34 Responses to Nigel Deare and The Curse Of the Lillies #flashfiction

  1. another good one Geoff. I;m still chuckling at where the antlers are supposed to go. 😀

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  2. Mick Canning says:

    Oh, other people’s problems, eh?

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  3. Wow! Geoff. This had to be the wildest explosion of imagination I’ve read in ages. I suggest you rein in that manic laughter just long enough to check on the continued safety of Esther Chilton. We don’t want her injured and I believe she might have been pretty close to your ground zero on this one.

    Mental images can be powerful things. Some have been known to start wars and other, just nasty rashes, Then there are those that most likely leave the reader with a condition that must closely resemble, and indeed may have been “caught” by your own contagious manic laughter. Society can clearly bear one such afflict-ee, but do we really want to see what happens if it goes viral…?

    Standing down here. Wish me luck on regaining some degree of focus on the work my employer hopes I accomplish after this ride.


    • TanGental says:

      It’s ok Gary, were you to turn me over, next to the bar code (which is quite close to the bar bill) you’ll find a suitably comrehensive pubic health warning including that I must not be cloned in any circumstnaces except if i have offerd to pay said bar bill.


  4. Ritu says:

    Oh that was hilarious!!!

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  5. Allie P. says:

    Have you seen the movie, The Lobster? Because this reminded me of that. Unique and entertaining, while utterly bizarre.

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  6. Could be no other reason that stag is in that waterlily laden river – none at all………

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  7. Geoff, you’re in rare form! From multi-species adaptation to mainlining concentrated deernip — fabulous. Mega hugs.

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  8. 😀 What the…? Where the…? Do you drink before or during your story ideas?! 😀

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  9. Well, I wasn’t expecting that when I set the photo prompt!!!

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  10. JT Twissel says:

    Nigel certainly has had a checkered past and now bathing with the writing lilies, oh my.

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