Travelling Light, Travelling Right #poem #poetry

To continue my first line poems, this week it is the third most popular poem as voted by the BBC’s viewers, The Listeners by Walter de la Mare. Enjoy.

Is there anybody there, said the traveller

Because I really need the loo;

The sign is clear, unambiguous, 

For the many not the few. 

It’s not a function of the state

To tell me when to go

My body ain’t so politic 

But it has some rights, you know.

It’s free to breathe, this air of ours

It’s not yours to take or tax

We’ll mind our precious oxygen,

Our guard, we’ll not relax.

For I might be from the dispossessed

A clan that’s been sidelined

Whose every move is criticised

And motives oft maligned.

I’m just a bloke, a traveller

Don’t judge me by my skin

I’m cold, and really fit to bust;

For f**k sake let me in.

About TanGental

My name is Geoff Le Pard. Once I was a lawyer; now I am a writer. I've published four books - Dead Flies and Sherry Trifle, My Father and Other Liars, Salisbury Square and Buster & Moo. In addition I have published three anthologies of short stories and a memoir of my mother. More will appear soon. I will try and continue to blog regularly at about whatever takes my fancy. I hope it does yours too. These are my thoughts and no one else is to blame. If you want to nab anything I post, please acknowledge where it came from.
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9 Responses to Travelling Light, Travelling Right #poem #poetry

  1. Ritu says:

    This did make me giggle and reminded me… I must dash to the loo!!!

    Liked by 1 person

  2. The original has been a great favourite of mine for many years. I knew it by heart and loved the conversations that it caused in classes of 12 and 13 year olds. Your version would bring about a different, but highly amusing, conversation I’m sure 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Travel Love Kai says:

    Great fun had to laugh

    Liked by 1 person

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