Doing Lines, Crosing Lines #microcosms

About TanGental

My name is Geoff Le Pard. Once I was a lawyer; now I am a writer. I've published four books - Dead Flies and Sherry Trifle, My Father and Other Liars, Salisbury Square and Buster & Moo. In addition I have published two anthologies of short stories, Life, in a Grain of Sand and Life in a Flash. More will appear soon, including a memoir of my mother's last years. I will try and continue to blog regularly at geofflepard.com about whatever takes my fancy. I hope it does yours too. These are my thoughts and no one else is to blame. If you want to nab anything I post, please acknowledge where it came from.
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19 Responses to Doing Lines, Crosing Lines #microcosms

  1. Ritu says:

    This is touching…

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  2. willowdot21 says:

    Oh! Geoff, I am sobbing like a baby. I might be feeling delicate but the thought of those young men some mere boys going through such harrowing times. I fully see why he felt he had to pay for surving… Of course he should not of felt like that but he was not alone. Like my Dad’s friend Father Anno who survived a Japanese war camp , he used to test the tissue thin pages out of his missal for the men to make ciggerettes out of God knows what. Like my uncle Tom who physically survived the WW1 trenches but was a hollow shell of a man.
    I am sure you know some survivers too, you dad saw some awful things too.
    Thank you for reminding us of these brave men and women too. 💜

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  3. I am always blown away when you decide to write like this! And undone!

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  4. Charli Mills says:

    Marvelous writing, Geoff. “He had survived. A mistake for which he would pay in his imaginings for the rest of his days.” That phrase is still lived by many. Just different wars, different survival. And still, we chatter on in class, never understanding the silent damage. You did the topic justice.

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  5. Elizabeth says:

    Very accurate portrayal of the intrusive thoughts that are part of PTSD.

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  6. Norah says:

    Such a sad piece, Geoff. Living – I’m sure many relived over and over and over. Poor old Gibblets, I feel for him; but those boys – forgive them, for they know not what they do. Hopefully, they never will. Thanks to Gibblets and others like him.

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