Following In My Footsteps #microcosms #flashfiction

‘Hey, yo, moron. See.’

‘What, spotty?’

‘Footprints. Told you there was someone, dude.’

‘You’re the moron. They’re yours. Ours. Mine.’

‘Yeah, right. Like I’d fall for that trick. Geez.’

‘I’m creeped by your stupid obsession. Talking to yourself. Don’t you get it yet?’

‘See. My foot’s smaller than the print.’

‘God. Of course. It’s sand, numpty. It spreads.’

‘Yeah but there’s two tracks.’


‘Two tracks. Two people.’

‘Thus me. You. Us. Christ, will you stop talking to yourself. I’ve walked round this island twice and there’s no one.’

‘Not that we’ve seen.’

‘Like on the boat? You pushed the skipper overboard…’

‘That was a stowaway. Hey, it could be him. Here. Maybe he swam…’

‘That was two days ago. You think he swam ahead of the boat?’

‘Why not? That would explain the footprints.’

‘Can’t. You. Get. This. You killed our one hope of rescue. You crashed the boat into this godforsaken rock. And now you think there’s someone stalking us, me.’

‘Yeah, exactamondo. We’ll catch him and kill him.’

‘Yeah? And how… Geez, where’d you get the knife?’

‘Ha! You think you’re so smart.’

‘You’re cracked, the shrink was right. Effing psycho. You know what they’d call it if you did catch the guy making those prints?’

‘Self defence.’

‘Suicide. Hey, what are you doing? Be careful with that knife.’

‘Not so keen now, are you? Maybe your making those prints. Maybe your the creep.’

‘Of course I’m making the prints. You are too. They’re our prints. It’s just us, me, We, I who’s here. If you… bloody hell, that hurt.’

‘Yeah, it did, didn’t it? What about this…?’

‘Mate, you’ve stabbed me!’

‘Me too. That’ll teach us.’

‘Hey, look. There’s a boat.’

‘Too late…’

This piece is part of this week’s Microcosms prompt, here, using the following: character – teenage psychopath, setting – island, genre – horror. It scored me an honourable mention from the judge.


About TanGental

My name is Geoff Le Pard. Once I was a lawyer; now I am a writer. I've published four books - Dead Flies and Sherry Trifle, My Father and Other Liars, Salisbury Square and Buster & Moo. In addition I have published three anthologies of short stories and a memoir of my mother. More will appear soon. I will try and continue to blog regularly at about whatever takes my fancy. I hope it does yours too. These are my thoughts and no one else is to blame. If you want to nab anything I post, please acknowledge where it came from.
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18 Responses to Following In My Footsteps #microcosms #flashfiction

  1. willowdot21 says:

    Okay, I am confused! Great post.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Hmm. At least he wasn’t alone.

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Ritu says:

    Now that was twisted!

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Erika Kind says:

    Wow! You are truly the master of twists… and black humor… lol!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Murder-suicide with one body – So clever – so cracked!! 😀

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Excellent work…nicely brought home.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. noelleg44 says:

    Great take, Geoff! And creepy, too!

    Liked by 1 person

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