Open the Box #short story #writephoto

sue vincent chestZach Peters tapped his pen on the clipboard. ‘That’s about it. Your mother’s house is empty. We’ve left a few things in the garage which we thought you should decide if you want to keep.’

Amelia Johnson nodded. Her mother kept so little she didn’t expect much. Indeed, the framed portrait of her grandfather and four photo albums weren’t much to represent a life.

Zach touched her elbow and directed her gaze at the far wall. ‘We found that chest. It’s locked mind.’

Amelia stared at the battered trunk. ‘Goodness, now that takes me back.’ She let a smile grow on her lips. ‘Mother’s trunk. She said it would be mine one day, though I thought it had gone long since.’

‘What’s in it?’

‘She said it was something that my grandfather was particularly attached to.’ She giggled. ‘Family stuff, I suppose. Can you open it?’

Zach pulled out a pouch with some skeleton keys.  He began to fiddle with the lock. ‘You sure you want to know? Could be some family secret? Some practical joke?’

Amelia laughed. ‘My mother? Hardly. You couldn’t meet anyone more serious. She always said being the family head was a burden.’

There was a loud click. Zach stood and lifted the lid. He peered inside. ‘Looks like she’s kept footballs.’ He tugged out a bag. ‘There are four of these.’

As Zach tipped the contents of the first bag onto the floor, her mother’s words from long before ‘One day you’ll carry this burden’ rang in Amelia’s ears. Her grandfather’s mummified head rolled to a stop by her feet. She met Zach’s horrified gaze. ‘She said one day I’d take over as head. I didn’t realize she meant it quite so literally.’

Sue Vincent’s latest prompt is around the above picture

About TanGental

My name is Geoff Le Pard. Once I was a lawyer; now I am a writer. I've published three books - Dead Flies and Sherry Trifle, My Father and Other Liars and Salisbury Square. In addition I published an anthology of short stories, Life, in a Grain of Sand this summer. A fourth book will be out soon. This started life as a novel in a week on this blog and will follow later this year. I blog about all sorts at geofflepard.com and welcome all comments. These are my thoughts and no one else is to blame. If you want to nab anything I post, please acknowledge where it came from.
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39 Responses to Open the Box #short story #writephoto

  1. Whoa! That was a surprise!

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  2. Oh yes, liked this enormously!

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  3. Ritu says:

    Ok Mr Creepy!
    That was just morbidly fascinating!!!
    Whose were the other heads?!?

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  4. willowdot21 says:

    eek!! very twisted…. I love it!! 🙂

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  5. Glory be. Mother played her cards close to her chest. Love the contrast to the ending, “You couldn’t meet anyone more serious.” 😀 😀 😀 Fabulous twist.

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  6. OMG…it seems to fit here. I so seldom get to use it and mean it. ☺

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  7. FABULOUS!!! I wanted this ending and I got it! LOVE it!

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  8. ‘Some Heads are Gonna Roll,’ Judas Priest in the background. Seriously, I loved the buildup and the subtleties, such as letting herself smile. Great characterization without overdoing it. I’m ready for the next instalment, Geoff.

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  9. Autism Mom says:

    Lol, part Amy Tan part Edgar Allan Poe! 🙂

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  10. jan says:

    Goodness – did I miss something – is it Halloween? Hope I don’t dream of mummified heads tonight!

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  11. Norah says:

    Oh my goodness, Geoff. I wasn’t expecting that! I wouldn’t want to be the head of that family! 🙂

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  12. Was she related to Norman Bates’ mother by any chance? Very creepy.

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  13. Sue Vincent says:

    Definitely twisted, Geoff 🙂

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  14. Ali Isaac says:

    Ugh! Very good! But you know what’s weird? I was thinking along the same lines…

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  15. Charli Mills says:

    No wonder her mother was so serious!

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  17. complexlyme says:

    gosh, quite a surprise i must say!
    loved it!!

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  18. Helen Jones says:

    Ooh, a sting in the tail of this story, Geoff! What (or who) is in the other three bags? 🙂

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  19. macjam47 says:

    Loved the ending. Nah, I loved the entire piece, but the ending caught me off guard.

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  20. lovessiamese says:

    Reblogged this on TheKingsKidChronicles and commented:
    Wait for it. . .the unexpected ending. Well done, Mr. Le Pard!

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  21. olganm says:

    Great story! Love the twist.

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  22. lbeth1950 says:

    Now, I do like that, but I don’t want a trunk full of heads.

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  24. rivrvlogr says:

    I hope she doesn’t lose her head over this. Well, maybe some day…

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