Statement of Intent

Charli Mills’ prompt this week is

September 23, 2015 prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) declare an intention in a story. Is it one person, a character speaking up or speaking out? Is it a group or a nation? Create a tension before or after the declaration. It can be private or public, big or small. Does it have power to those who state it or hear? What does it change?

Future Perfect

‘How did Milton die, Mum?’

Mary blinked at her daughter. ‘Milton? Grandpa’s dog?’

‘He died the same day as Grandpa, didn’t he?’

Mary hesitated, shifting the baby’s weight. ‘The heat. Grandpa never expected to be more than a minute posting his letter…’

‘Did he suffer?’

Charlotte started mewling and Mary offered her her little finger. Did Penny mean her grandfather or Milton? ‘I don’t think either did.’

Penny’s usually smooth forehead puckered. Instantly, Mary felt guilty. It was much easier at Charlotte’s age. Having to grow up and face reality was hard.

‘Mum, I want to become a vet.’

Mary’s story can be found here, if you want to catch up. 

 

About TanGental

My name is Geoff Le Pard. Once I was a lawyer; now I am a writer. I've published three books - Dead Flies and Sherry Trifle, My Father and Other Liars and Salisbury Square. In addition I published an anthology of short stories, Life, in a Grain of Sand this summer. A fourth book will be out soon. This started life as a novel in a week on this blog and will follow later this year. I blog about all sorts at geofflepard.com and welcome all comments. These are my thoughts and no one else is to blame. If you want to nab anything I post, please acknowledge where it came from.
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11 Responses to Statement of Intent

  1. That was an unexpected (and delightful) twist. And declaration. Love it. 🙂

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  2. rogershipp says:

    The heat can quickly sneak up on a person… or a pet! Well done!

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  3. Charli Mills says:

    Mary’s story has circled back to where it began. Surprising (yet delightful) to discover that the elixir is Mary’s daughter who declares to become a vet.

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  5. Sacha Black says:

    Aww I love this one how lovely and such a believable story

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Lisa Reiter says:

    Grabs you.. Wondering if it’s close to memoir? Xx

    Like

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