Part of the joy of a holiday is I get the time to write some poetry – I read a lot too but writing poetry is my mindfulness – it takes me to another place, a space between thinking and being, timeless yet full of emotion. This is one piece and its genesis.
If there’s one thing that you notice when you arrive on Lewis and journey south to Harris it is, spectacular landscapes apart, the lack of trees. Apparently it used not to be the case but now, outside of the persistence of local gardeners the countryside rolls away uninterrupted, at times green beyond lush and at others, lunar rocks tumbled hither and yon. The other noticeable feature is that, while Lewis stays gently undulating, with its small crisp peat-darkened pools, Harris looms, glowering from the heights, corralling you into valleys with vertiginous drops and crystal sharp lochs. These contrasts prompted this sonnet.
Hebridean Love Rivals
Lewis and Harris, rivals in love
For the heart of the Hebridean Queen
Declared, in their ways, ‘I’m willing’ ‘I’m keen’
‘To the heights – To the depths – of my love I will prove.’
For Lewis, he rolled out his land so flat
And ditched and dimpled it, simple and neat
Purpling heather pushed up through the peat
And a granite walled castle with its ‘fáilte’ mat.
Harris laughed as he rucked up the earth,
Making mountains with faces dauntingly steep
‘We’ll live here, my love, we two with our sheep
Warmed by our whiskey and peat-smoking hearth.
But the Queen simply sighed, ‘Gents, if you please.
That’s all very well, but where are my trees?’
That was brilliant! I loved the way each showed off what they had done with the land to the Queen but she was just interested in having some trees! 🙂
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Thank you. Really glad you enjoyed it!
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Location bright, vibrant colors before other plants
where you’ll be able to see them.
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:-))
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Loved it! Trying so hard yet missing the point, lol!
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*smiles*
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I’ve been to the Hebrides and agree it is a spectacular place, well, they are two distinct places rather than one entity. Haunting landscape filled with ancient sites and desolation at times. Lovely poem and photos. Brings to life the love triangle 🙂
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Thanks so much. We had a lovely time there. It is spectacular
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Great to read again 💙💟
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