The aspiring novelist – haiku challenge

Rare, indeed, is he

Who can accept a critique

Of his art with grace.

It is rarely done

Well, said his harsh judge, for once

In full agreement.

This is part of Ronovan’s Haiku challenge #32

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About TanGental

My name is Geoff Le Pard. Once I was a lawyer; now I am a writer. I've published three books - Dead Flies and Sherry Trifle, My Father and Other Liars and Salisbury Square. In addition I published an anthology of short stories, Life, in a Grain of Sand this summer. A fourth book will be out soon. This started life as a novel in a week on this blog and will follow later this year. I blog about all sorts at geofflepard.com and welcome all comments. These are my thoughts and no one else is to blame. If you want to nab anything I post, please acknowledge where it came from.
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7 Responses to The aspiring novelist – haiku challenge

  1. Norah says:

    A double haiku? That’s rare. But I won’t be a harsh critic. I think you have done well. 🙂

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  2. Ronovan says:

    Like reading a passage of a novel. Greatly enjoyed it and shared it. Loved the wording and how it all flowed. If this is how your books are then I am envious.

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  4. I really enjoyed the flow of this and the idea presented is so accurate and cleverly expressed in so few words, yet doesn’t feel like some are missing out of necessity to fit Haiku criteria. Well done.

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