The sweep of history in a flash

A small piece of flash received a ‘special mention’ over at Flash! Friday which is a first (or maybe second ) for me and, given they have dozens of entries, slightly pleasing (yea, right, you love it. Ed). The prompt was to write, in 200 words, give or take ten, about a Janitor and the picture prompt was the Coliseum. This is what I penned. Look at the winners by following the above link (and DB Foy’s winning entry deserves all plaudits). Give it a try if you haven’t. There’s lots of support. Please don’t be put off by what is inevitably the subjective nature of judging. The winners are always excellent (as if you would be different if were you judging, of course. Ed)

The sweep of history 

Cardinal Spencer brushed cigarette ash off his sleeve; another stain removed. He watched the police hold back the crowds, while the paramedics worked futilely to punch life into the Pope’s chest. The white choir dress began to stain red, this taint beyond his powers. Forty years serving five Popes and it had come this.

The shadows from the Coliseum gave him both shade and brief anonymity. Working in the background was his real skill. Cleaning up the Papal messes: the high profile –the collapse of Banco Ambrosiano and Calvi’s suicide; the abuse of children and the subsequent cover ups – and the mundane. God’s Janitor. But now the dirt was too ingrained.

He tapped the nearest policeman on the sleeve. The officer stepped back to let the Cardinal through. He moved confidently to the man clearly in charge. “I think you will want this.” He held out the handgun.

He looked at the dead Pontiff’s unseeing eyes and prayed. He had willingly dirtied his hands. He had done all that they asked; every crisis, every problem he had been there to cauterise, sanitise, pacify. But not this, this treachery, this undermining of everything Holy. He knew he had to act when they had come and said, ‘We want to modernise’.


About TanGental

My name is Geoff Le Pard. Once I was a lawyer; now I am a writer. I've published four books - Dead Flies and Sherry Trifle, My Father and Other Liars, Salisbury Square and Buster & Moo. In addition I have published three anthologies of short stories and a memoir of my mother. More will appear soon. I will try and continue to blog regularly at about whatever takes my fancy. I hope it does yours too. These are my thoughts and no one else is to blame. If you want to nab anything I post, please acknowledge where it came from.
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19 Responses to The sweep of history in a flash

  1. willowdot21 says:

    I see the makings of a thriller there.


  2. Great story. Congratulations on your special mention 🙂 Very well-deserved 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Congrats! I’ve never had the guts to participate, not being a “fiction” writer and all that. But this is fantastic.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Sacha Black says:

    This is brilliant 😃 definitely need to turn this into something longer

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Cindi says:

    Intriguing. I want more!

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Charli Mills says:

    Potent pontificating! Great story, Geoff…what are you eating for breakfast? Your creativity is on fire! Congrats on the win!

    Liked by 2 people

  7. well done Geoff but not surprised. It is nothing but deserving. Just hope I don’t come across a janitor like him.

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